How are these songs i made up? i have had some good feedback, what do you think?

the lyrics are good. most songs never see the light of day. but i am a studio musician is Phoenix Arizona and i've written guitar parts for countless artists. you just need to have in mind what style you want your song and find someone to help compose the rest. try placing an add in the newspaper specifying what you want in a partner and i'm sure someone will some around.